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My main character for Dra-Una. PLEASE DO NOT STEAL! :)
anyway this is a series I have started to write, hopefully some day you will see it in the book stores.
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From the Critique: Your ear is too high, the top of the ear should be at the same height your eyebrows and the bottom should be at the same height as the nose. Your shoulders also seem to narrow in comparison to the neck, which make it look like it is mounted rather than one complete movement. The shirt should also add an extra thickness to the shoulders, the shirt you took off some of the thickness, adding to the mounted effect. You didn't finished the horns either, but I don't think it hurt the piece too terribly, it may even add to the piece. You may also want to smooth our some of the line art around the chin.

Other than that, you did a great job on the eyes. Great choice in colors, the art of the shirt is AWESOME! :P