nickelodeon pitch (space junk)

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ok I guess I can finally show you what I tried to pitch to Nick, its still WIP and some of the timing still needs to be worked on and add voices and sound effects. I gave my self about a week to come up with 3 storys but only got time for one. and less then a week to make character design and backgrounds looks, and I think 75 scenes if storyboard. hope you like it :) (Smile) >>>
Nick pitch no.2 1/3 by phation Nick pitch no.2 2/3 by phation Nick pitch no.2 3/3 by phation
there is a lot more sketches I made for (spacejunk)



so I sent it off and 3 months later I got word from them (sorry it took me so long to get the news out)>>> NICK>>>


Dear ~~~~~~ ED:  (took out my real name)
 
Thank you for taking the time and effort to pitch to us. We really appreciate your patience in waiting to hear back from us. We received hundreds of submissions and wanted to fully review each one and properly give them the attention they deserve, but it took some time to do so.

As much as we enjoyed your submission, it was tough competition with only a handful of slots available, so unfortunately we are going to pass on "Space Junk". Also, please know, there were many factors going into the decision-making process that affected which pitches were going to best serve our overall goals with this shorts program.

That said, we found the "Space Junk" submission to be very polished and professional, but given the restraints of what we are looking for combined with only being able to select a few shorts to produce, we are passing on this project at this time.

There were so many great pitches and we appreciate you taking the time to share your work for our review in such a short time frame, especially given your other professional commitments.

Thank you again,

Nickelodeon Animation Development
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so they say it was nice and looked professional so that was good to hear.
but yah the pitch did not fly. the other 2 were>>>
Nick pitch no.1 1/2 by phation Nick pitch no.1 2/2 by phation and Nick pitch no.3 by phation
but ran out of time.
 

and here was the pitch for ( space junk)>>>>

Life is hard for the children of St, Don's orphanage, especially for little Ninixza. Tomboyish in nature, 8 year-old Ninixza passes most of her time playing video games and getting into trouble. Troubled by bullies, social awkwardness, and her inability to fit in, Ninixza decides it is time for her to run away from St, Don's, never to return.

 

That is when, on one particularly rainy evening, she stumbles upon a curious device...

 

Having an almost alien appearance, the device immediately grabs Nin's attention. With so many cool colors and buttons, it must be some form of video game controller! Curiosity gets the best of her as Nin tests out the buttons, sending her on the adventure of her lifetime!

 

Ninixza is suddenly transported to a strange, new world. The sky, trees, animals, moons (more than ONE???) are all completely different. Here, she is befriended by Zha-Q, a curious, yet timid alien inventore who lives in a junk yard, and just so happens to be the creator of the device Nin has... unfortunately damaged en route to his planet.

 

Now trapped on the surface of this planet, OrUooBo, Ninixza and Zha-Q journey with each other, in hopes of finding Nin a way back to Earth. Throughout their adventure, they discover much about themselves, others, and the environment they brave each day-- an exciting journey, and a true, unbreakable friendship that spans several light years away.

there is more BOI on the characters but this Journal too long.

thank you for taking the time to read, and all work here is copy righted so don't take not only by me but nick to.

have a nice day ^^

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Congrats on the positive rejection.  That is a lot better than the rejections for submissions I've been going through (if even lucky to even receive a rejection sometimes).  Definitely means you did well and just weren't what they were looking for so keep it up and you'll definitely break through soon.